Tuesday, August 15, 2006

With You..


Away from the sound of man
A way that leads to you
Beyond the leaves of the day
A day that seems to be true..

Betray the tears from the woods
Beat rays and seers from their hoods
Beyond the leaves of the clay
Be fond of the mellifluous you..

See life and sea-like hair
See how she likes to stare
See yonder leaves made of hay
See sound of the soothing soniferous you..

Imagine scenes never written
A magic she'd never smitten
Incredible leaves that seem to say
The time has come and I'm with you.

4 Comments:

Blogger Missy Baba said...

While listening to Shostakovitch's 4th symphony, written in 1936 and performed only in 1960.. it reflects the chaos of the 1930's... and as I read "with you", I conjure an image of man one with nature and the vividness of each scene... even the silence is palpable.

This one isn't my favorite, I came back to it a second time and then fell in love with the third stanza, for she here would mean nature to me.. trying her best to catch your attention while you miss out-unfortunately on scenes that would leave you alive..

Nice one here.

Shinjini

August 16, 2006 at 10:20:00 AM GMT+5:30  
Blogger blinded blue teddy said...

Its beautiful. I love the style in which its written..... everything about it....

January 23, 2008 at 2:35:00 AM GMT+5:30  
Blogger blinded blue teddy said...

:)
came back to read it

October 5, 2008 at 12:46:00 AM GMT+5:30  
Blogger blinded blue teddy said...

"The time has come and I'm with you."

January 28, 2009 at 12:27:00 PM GMT+5:30  

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